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01-15-2010, 06:44 AM
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| I'm a Cleveland Nigga  Join Date: Apr 2009
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Rep Power: 5  |  Run This Town(Remix) ft. Dwash
I had my bro Dwash get on this 2nd verse. It's pretty good imo. Give me feedback please. Much appreciated guys. zSHARE - Run This Town _With Hook_.mp3 |
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01-15-2010, 08:06 AM
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| S.W.S Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: JerZ/FL Age: 20
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Rep Power: 3   | Re: Run This Town(Remix) ft. Dwash
i like ya delivery real rapp u got it
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01-15-2010, 08:50 PM
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| i4ill DSB Moderator  Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Jordan, Zarqa City Age: 25
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Rep Power: 3 | Re: Run This Town(Remix) ft. Dwash
considerable elevation right there, you're getting better and better. delivery was nice but at some parts your voice got low. Flow was on point and lyrics were tight, nice rhymes and vocabulary especially in the last verse...the last verse by the way had a better delivery and overall was sicker, I thought the wordplaying was sick; Quote:
Dwash needs a lot of practice, he's not bad but he gotta do this more often...delivery lacked energy, flow was kinda shakey at few parts but most importantly the quality was quite bad, a lot of hissing and the vocals were too loud... overall this was a decent track, good job...keep it up.
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