I liked the beat you chose for this. Your flow sounds on point, but the pattern you went with is too basic and there were many pauses. It's not flawed though so props for that. Next time try to go with different patterns, maybe a but faster flows or something. Delivery sound fine to me, but again I can't really tell much with understadning what you say. However, I think you can add more emotions cuz you sounded apathetic, unless the topic of the song requires this attitude...I don't know. Lyrically I had no idea what you were sayin'?! lol but I have a feeling it's some deep shit judging from the beat. As for the quality it can be better, I heard some imperfections in the vocals and the mixing wasn't the best. Still it was pretty good and very promising for someone that just started.
That's the magic of Music, it's a universal language. I may not understand anything but I'll definitely feel what you say through the way you say it, it's all about feelings eventually.
You only live once do whatever you like
I thought I'd be with you for only one night
Now I'm with this girl for the rest of my life
That drunk and hot girl
