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nah you i can tell ur an OG good job
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some sick ass flow on this shit my fav. line "Im controlling the world like im playing wii-- wii wii wii" extremely deep, you kinda accurately captured the stronghold that the world has in our lives and our constant need and desire to own IT, not let it own US. Was that your intention?
__________________ Rape Story of the Week "Ron Artest grabbed my hand and pulled me up on stage with him. It was just me and him for a little bit. Unreal. .[he] was reaching...out to shake my hand like i was a celebrity. Then... [he] hopped on [my dick]... What a night." -Illmatic |
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lol. kinda. i was sayin how like technology takes over our youth and then i said "wea wea" as in agreement oh do i love french fry saying diverse our country is and we borrow almost everything from other nations
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ya I agree man I liked how you said "fuck that Im going home.. no FUCK THAT Im staying right here" were you tryina establish your strong position and take control over your rap with that?
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nice the only reason this song is great is bec/ of all the hidden symbolism idk if you intended for that to happen, if you did you're a genius, if not this song is below average.. but Im guessing you masterminded this whole song
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| imma UpperLowerEast nigga |
well i meant everything except for something bout oreos lolol. my rapping may not be good. but im good at comin up with methaphors. methaphors are my strong point. like in my verse with hannibal run this town " i get so many hoes its like im watering my garden"
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sick shit man how do u come up w/ that.. do you think of something specific or they just randomly come to you?
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| imma UpperLowerEast nigga |
like at random bro. " I get more dough and bust more nuts than a krispe kreme factory" i never right em down though i can just see things differently i guess.
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you might be a genius I am jealous I got this song on repeat man cant stop listening to the sick wordplay "slashin ya haters like im a fuckin ninja" OUCH.
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